~Colter Martin, Class of 2025 Chaos In My Room Colter Martin, Class of 2025 It’s a mess in my room Sheets are everywhere There are books on the floor The laundry is overflowing Oh, and I forgot to mention Clean clothes are not hung up The lamp is tipped over Dog fur...
Working it Out With a Teammate ~Colter Martin, Class of 2025 Conflict On The Lacrosse Field Colter Martin, Class of 2025 “Yeah, yeah, I’m open!” “No, I’m taking it to the cage.” “I’m wide open, look at my matchup, Oh, come on man why did you have to take it to...
Working Through Fenn Together ~Colter Martin, Class of 2025 “Best friends believe in you, when you do not believe in yourself” Anonymous To my classmates, my friends at Fenn, I just want to let you know how much I appreciate you as I depart from...
5 responses to “The Power of Fennship”
I really like the orientation of this piece. It’s unusual for a piece to be addressed like a letter, especially to a group of people, and it really strengthens it because as one of your friends it really feels like we are just talking together, rather than me just reading.
Wow, this was moving, I loved the way you addressed the students personally. This was an essay was one of your best writing pieces. Keep up the good work.
Wow, this is a special essay. You described your time at Fenn in great depth, and you shared many special moments between you snd your classmates. I loved when you wrote about the recoding room; that is a very fun and special place for me. Great job Colter!
It was great sharing time with you at Fenn. Go get them at Bell Hill!
Wow, Colter. This is truly an amazing essay. The way you addressed the reader really made it special. Fenn is truly an amazing place, and I am glad I shared this experience with you.