~Will Cook, Class of 2025
the one day
when the red roses grow
my hamster died
the one day
when the blue jay sang
my dog died
the one day
when the sun shined bright
i found out my mom had cancer
the one day
when my yellow school bus came late
my uncle died
the one day
when
the cardinal
sang
i
Died
Will this was beautiful. The writing was exquisite
Wow Cookie, this was deep. This was a great piece of poetry. You were very open to the reader which brings value because it brings a feel that you have a great relationship with the viewer.