
The Fenn School 2024
William O. TRAVERS
WRITING COMPETITION
At Fenn, we have a tradition of acknowledging the winners of the William O. Travers Writing Contest, an annual literary competition named after former Fenn faculty member, William Travers. The English and Library Departments carefully review and judge all submissions. The best pieces in the categories of poetry, fiction, and personal narrative are chosen from grades four through nine.
Although many excellent submissions may not receive recognition on Prize Day, we still believe that they deserve to be celebrated. Therefore, with the hard work and dedication of Upper School English teacher John Fitzsimmons, we have created an anthology to showcase the effort and creativity of our student body. We take immense pride in our students, and we know William Travers would be proud to see that we are recognizing all students who have shared their writing with our community.
Our heartfelt desire is that you discover as much delight from these compositions as we do.
Jill MacKinnon
The Fenn School English Department Chair
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams!
Live the life you’ve imagined.
2024 Travers Prize Winners
All Essays
All Poetry
All Fiction
Class of 2024
Memoirs & Recitations
Class of 2025
Memoirs & Recitations
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Class of 2024
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English
-Gordie Gund, Class of 2024 It’s 8:45 AM I’m sitting in Mrs LIbby’s room And I hear her say “GET OUT” What class, I ask “Fitz English” oh great I haven’t even touched my homework how am I supposed...
The Water
~Finn Gerighty, Class of 2024 The white water. Weaving between the grainy sand. Washing up against the marble rocks. Smashing up against the silver land. The white water. Blanketing the ocean floor....
An Ode to Planespotting
~Xavier Mercado, Class of 2024 Where skies meet land, Eager eyes and eager ears, A planespotter stands, keen and true, Captivated by the soaring sight. Amongst the rumble of engines might, We seek...
Tomorrow is Another Day
~Alexander Luo, Class of 2024 The sun shines high today, I’m ready to set sail. The ocean looks so bright and promising, that I can’t help but smile. My sailboat pushes off from the dock, and I grab...
Basketball
~Eric Olson, Class of 2024 In the gym's embrace, where dreams ignite, Seven souls unite, in passion's flight. With every dribble, a tale unfolds, In the heartbeat of the court, victory molds....
English
-Gordie Gund, Class of 2024 It’s 8:45 AM I’m sitting in Mrs LIbby’s room And I hear her say “GET OUT” What class, I ask “Fitz English” oh great I haven’t even touched my homework how am I supposed...
The Water
~Finn Gerighty, Class of 2024 The white water. Weaving between the grainy sand. Washing up against the marble rocks. Smashing up against the silver land. The white water. Blanketing the ocean floor....
An Ode to Planespotting
~Xavier Mercado, Class of 2024 Where skies meet land, Eager eyes and eager ears, A planespotter stands, keen and true, Captivated by the soaring sight. Amongst the rumble of engines might, We seek...
Tomorrow is Another Day
~Alexander Luo, Class of 2024 The sun shines high today, I’m ready to set sail. The ocean looks so bright and promising, that I can’t help but smile. My sailboat pushes off from the dock, and I grab...
Basketball
~Eric Olson, Class of 2024 In the gym's embrace, where dreams ignite, Seven souls unite, in passion's flight. With every dribble, a tale unfolds, In the heartbeat of the court, victory molds....
Class of 2025
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Within the Campsite
Friendship, joy, and courage through the woods ~Will Kugeler, Class of 2025 "Success is not final, failure is not fatal:it is the courage to continue that counts." — Winston S....
Day in a Life
~Will Kugeler, Class of 2025 Life flies by when your having fun “ Yo do you want to do something today” “ No I can’t I’m sorry” “Why” “ But we only have so much time together...
Out of Bounds and…
~Eli Waldeck, Class of 2025 I should take it “Degnon, what are you doing?" ”What do you mean Angelous? I chased the ball out?” ”No, like why are you picking it up?” ”Because I chased it. C’mon go up...
The Dream
~Eli Waldeck, Class of 2025 Three houra I will never forget Standing on the fence, Of the iconic, Homewood field, The air was crisp. The sun, High in the sky, Shining down, On the field. An...
How Fortnite changed my life
“ the higher the rarity, the more damage it causes”- Sypher PK The game of memories ~Will Kugeler Have you ever played? Well for me July 12th 2018 the day that changed my life. Hopping...
James Kugeler
~Will Kugeler, Class of 2025 “I’d like to live as a poor man with lots of money”- Pablo’s Picasso Chapter 1 Take over the chateau. James Kugeler is 19 years old. He was a Canadian...
History Repeats Itself
~Jimmy McLaughlin, Class of 2025 Remembrance “History repeats itself, first as a tragedy, second as a farce.”~Karl Marx My name is Jimmy McLaughlin, and I was in charge of writing and editing our...
Slam Poetry
~Jimmy McLaughlin, Class of 2025 Stepping Out of Your Comfort Zone “Do something that scares you everyday.”~Eleanor Roosevlt My experience writing slam poetry has been mostly positive. One of the...
The Tunnel
~Jimmy McLaughlin, Class of 2025 Facing Your Fears “Never trust your fears, they don’t know your strength.”~Athena Singh The Tunnel by Dorris Lessing is a compelling novel following the journey...
A Students Reflection on Slam
~Finn Whitman, Class of 2025 “I don’t know why part of me hates poetry, but It’s true. Part of me does”-Finn Whitman The slam Poetry unit was challenging yet quite rewarding. The poems that we had...
Class of 2026
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Failing is progress
A reflection on perseverance ~Johnnie Soukup, Class of 2026 “Perseverance is the hard work you do after you get tired of doing the hard work you already did.”~Newt Gingrich SOMETIMES LIFE...
The Fury of Frustration
In perspective of Xiomara ~Joseph Blake, Class of 2026 The Fury of Frustration In perspective of Xiomara I’m in the hallway Punching the boy against the locker The boy who put his hands on me The...
Lose
~Tye Reesey, Class of 2026 On the fieldin the gamethe sun on the back of my neckstaring across the field with horror in my eyeswatching the opposing team take shots, one by one. and just barely...
The Seige
~J Turner, Class of 2026 It was a foggy day on Alderney island as George Pike trotted down the narrow path towards the town center, his small stone cottage disappearing behind the hill. The waving...
Midnight
~Waren Turner, Class of 2026 Chapter One There have been stories about the house. How going into it at midnight is a “mistake,” and how people who do enter it suffer a “gruesome fate.” Naturally, I...
Those We Love
2024 Travers Winner! ~Luke Soliman, Class of 2026 Those we love have come and gone Those we love have always looked ahead Those we love have always stayed Those we love will never be dead In our...
I Am Poem
~Tye Reesey, Class of 2026 I am Energetic and Athletic I wonder what it would be like to be a professional lacrosse player I hear LACROSSE I see Paul Rabil I want to see Paul Rabil I am Energetic...
Today
~Peter Mokoro, Class of 2026 Today Tomorrow My heart, filled with sorrow Warm bed Cold heart I was wrong from the start Good plan Bad guess I coulda had it all man 11 4 2010 The day when my mistakes...
Zombie Lobby
~Reese Cawthorne, Class of 2026 “QUICK GET UP WE NEED TO GO!” Henry stumbled out of bed and said, “Why, dad? What's wrong?” Now, you might be wondering what's happening, but before I can tell you...
Jennifer’s Body
~Renzo Ma, Class of 2026 87 steps. That was how many steps were from George’s kitchen to his car. He counted every single one. George climbed into his car and went on his way to his family reunion...
Class of 2027
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Yellow Snow
~Aiden Shang, Class of 2027 It is winter and it had just snowed, very white, and very fluffy. A person gone insane, looked at the snow. Licked his lips as he dived in the mountain of snow, as high...
The Final
~Will Galati, Class of 2027 I go up with my teammate the other team looks on both of us determined to call the gold trophy our own. The ref decides to do a golden goal, first team to score wins. The...
Skating
~Donald Wallace, Class of 2027 I step on the ice, cold. Winds blow past me, as classmates skate by. My blades dance across the ice. My skates carve the edges. While everyone else in the class chats,...
Key Lime Pie
~Thomas Belin, Class of 2027 Key Lime pie so yummy and sweet. I’m loving the CRUNCH of the crust. It’s a special treat. Thanks to my grandmother always there to celebrate. I love Key Lime pie...
Thoom
~Beckett Dwyer, Class of 2027 Thoom. A sound that happens right before disaster. Thoom, thoom, thoom. The sound of angry footsteps pounding the stairs. The noise when you drop something. A sudden...
One Choice
~Raffe Pisano, Class of 2027 I only have one choice in the world. My parents say to bring shirts underwear pants shorts toothbrush toothpaste pillow blanket soap and some food. Finding what to bring...
Whoosh!
~Max Kpissay, Class of 2027 Whoosh! Oh, what a word. Whoosh! Soaring through the air, like a bird. Whoosh! I shoot the 3, I swish it, It’s not my 1st or 2nd, but my 3rd. The cool air whooshes up...
Splat!
~Eugene Dong, Class of 2027 Splat! The rotten tomato smashed onto the boy’s face. His parents are coming soon… Splat! An overripe orange fell from the tree. The flies are coming soon… Splat! A...
Challenges
~William Wu, Class of 2027 When challenges come, they may seem rough, but they shape us into diamonds, strong and tough. They test our limits, and push us to grow, and in the face of adversity, our...
The Whoosh of the Wind
2024 Travers Winner! ~Ross Wein, Class of 2027 The whoosh of the wind as it blows my kippah off my head at Temple Emunah. The whoosh of the people running out of Hebrew school. The whoosh of my...
Class of 2028
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O’ Eraser
~Colin Cull, Class of 2028 O’ Eraser you are so rubbery,You make me feel happy when I remove my mistakes- With your elastic texture and pink colors, Your eraser shavings do sadden me. With each...
Sun Poem
~Teddy Wagenknecht, Class of 2028 Big orange cookie Astonished surprise Orange and yellow pie Concluded, shocked Why Curious about this Cosmic phenomenon What, where, how Did this occur Astronomical...
Abyss Sphere
~ Ollie Needham, Class of 2028 Ring of light in the quiet night sharper than a knife the moon takes the stage Rips joy from the sun only for a bit but it does have fun The sun comes back Prepared...
The Good Book Poem
~JJ Lee, Class of 2028 I’m a book open me up take a look When you do see what’s inside you’ll find a world in which you can hide come on take a look I’m a really good book just open me up take a...
The Heart Of My World
~Zach Silverman, Class of 2028 My Beautiful masterpiece decked with books, clothes, games, random stuff and more random stuff My Cage where a wild free-roaming creature Sings and dances My Pool of...
My Room
~Evan Kaufman, Class of 2028 My room Domaine of stuffed animals and clothes With every corner clean as a palace floor My room A zen den for reading And talking to my parents The place I go when my...
When the Shadow of the Black Stained Sun Shines upon the Land
~Alex Kendall, Class of 2028 The sun disappears The sun transformed into the moon Now the moon shall get its revenge The evil moon turns the land into arctic land The lights of the land lose power A...
Eclipse Poem
~Drew Grattan, Class of 2028 A crescent sun gradually wanes It slips away into absolute nothingness too bad my iPad camera doesn't work The clouds fail to cover it the umbra passes across the sky...
Eclipse Poem
~Teagan Weintraub, Class of 2028 From a beautiful blue sky. To a blanket of darkness. A hush and stillness come across the land. In the near forest the animals wonder Animals are spooked by the...
Drowning Sun
2024 Travers Poetry Winner! ~Kannan K. Patel, Class of 2028 Get your glasses find a spot As the moon creeps and covers the sun kids stare up in awe at the moon that is finally bigger than the sun...
Class of 2029
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Spooky Story One
~Jacob, Class of 2029 One crisp day in late October a tallish, thin kid named Kevin Norton read a book called “Fact or fiction? Does worshiping evil bad guys make them come alive?” Kevin thought...

O’ Eraser
~Colin Cull, Class of 2028 O’ Eraser you are so rubbery,You make me feel happy when I remove my mistakes- With your elastic texture and pink colors, Your eraser shavings do sadden me. With each...
Yellow Snow
~Aiden Shang, Class of 2027 It is winter and it had just snowed, very white, and very fluffy. A person gone insane, looked at the snow. Licked his lips as he dived in the mountain of snow, as high...
The Final
~Will Galati, Class of 2027 I go up with my teammate the other team looks on both of us determined to call the gold trophy our own. The ref decides to do a golden goal, first team to score wins. The...
Skating
~Donald Wallace, Class of 2027 I step on the ice, cold. Winds blow past me, as classmates skate by. My blades dance across the ice. My skates carve the edges. While everyone else in the class chats,...
Key Lime Pie
~Thomas Belin, Class of 2027 Key Lime pie so yummy and sweet. I’m loving the CRUNCH of the crust. It’s a special treat. Thanks to my grandmother always there to celebrate. I love Key Lime pie...
Thoom
~Beckett Dwyer, Class of 2027 Thoom. A sound that happens right before disaster. Thoom, thoom, thoom. The sound of angry footsteps pounding the stairs. The noise when you drop something. A sudden...
One Choice
~Raffe Pisano, Class of 2027 I only have one choice in the world. My parents say to bring shirts underwear pants shorts toothbrush toothpaste pillow blanket soap and some food. Finding what to bring...
Whoosh!
~Max Kpissay, Class of 2027 Whoosh! Oh, what a word. Whoosh! Soaring through the air, like a bird. Whoosh! I shoot the 3, I swish it, It’s not my 1st or 2nd, but my 3rd. The cool air whooshes up...
Splat!
~Eugene Dong, Class of 2027 Splat! The rotten tomato smashed onto the boy’s face. His parents are coming soon… Splat! An overripe orange fell from the tree. The flies are coming soon… Splat! A...
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